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As Marisol wrote her letter. She decided that it would be a good idea to send some money to her husband. Her husband was at war in Afghanistan and she thought that maybe he could use a couple of extra dollars. She had heard that Afghanistan was very cold in the winter and perhaps he needed to buy some extra warm mittens or cap so she jumped into her car and drove off to the nearby bank where she kept all her money. She withdrew one hundred dollars and went to purchase a money order at the closest circle K. When she was getting into her car. She noticed a couple of suspicious teenagers at the stop sign they were all wearing bandanas and red and black garments. They appeared to be members of some sinister gang. When she stopped, they forced her out of her car. But what these young thugs did not know is that Marisol had recently earned a black belt in karate and was itching for a good fight. Plus, she was angry that her husband was away at war. They thought that Marisol would just cry and give them all her money at first they thought that Marisol was joking when she warned them that she had a black belt. But when the fight began. They soon realized that Marisol was a genuine martial artist. They were three gang members. The first she put down with a wicked karate chop to the throat. Which stopped him from breathing for a good while and paralyzed him. The second youth went down when Marisol bashed his head into the hood of the car. He suffered a broken nose. And a concussion as well. The third youth decided that he was better off running than facing the wrath of the karate master, Marisol there was no way that Marisol was going to let these scumbags take her money!